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GOB was winded from the horrendous ordeal that just transpired. He searched for a place to sit down for a few minutes. A simple resting place was in order, he reckoned. He needed to reorient himself and emerge from this mess somehow. He spotted a dimly lit bus-stop equipped with
billboard-emblazoned glass windows on three sides. For a second, he chuckled to himself as he thought of this bus-stop as portents of horrible things to come. He thought of a cage in a prison encasing his person for God knows how long. These thoughts withered away in a flash and thus he slowly ambled over to his temporary sojourn of peaceful rest. He sat down on the bench and examined the collection of adverts that graced the glass walls of this particular bus-stop. One advert promoted a pending party at the Bercy Sports Arena in which twenty, yes, that is right, twenty techno djs would spin electronic music from midnight until 3PM the following day. Another ad displayed a collection of hot and steamy American actors in an up and coming movie that surely was spawned by a plagiaristic yet dumbed-down read of a tale of classical epic proportion. He then looked to the sky, which, for the benefit of my reader's edification, meant he stared at a glass ceiling filled with the black markings of Gangster Graffiti.
He tracked through the years of his existence and wondered how God had chosen to deal him his personal hand of cards on Earth. He thought of his wife, his loving, true and faithful wife, and the beautiful child that they had brought into the world. He went through every year, from his relatively safe upbringing in an upper middle class community, to his happy-go-lucky years in a private party-oriented university, to his hard work at a few banks in Manhattan. He understood that God had decided that GOB III was not going to be genius, and he was at ease with this particular decision of his Maker, but he felt that he basically was good in the grand scheme of things, that he worked hard, and that he deserved to borrow on the credit card of immoral excess from time to time. He broke down and wailed like an infant in search of a mother's womb, but, unfortunately for our fair hero, there was no womb that he could discern either figuratively or symbolically. He was alone, and for a second he questioned his belief in God. For a some time that could not be quantified by our hero, he constructed a theory of the universe with no God, and part of his sloppy proof relied on a particular anecdote of his experience, for, he had just killed an innocent human being. How could he be, in a very short span of time, be instilled with enough rage, anger, or fear, to kill someone? He had no answer for this, and thus, he figured that there was no order in the universe, no safety switches pulled by alert angels, and that, ultimately, shit happens from time to time simply because there were no controls.
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GOBIII is making good way on his path of decadence.. Perhaps he is also on his way to hell? |
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Hell is a place on Earth...isn't that a song by some chick? |
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and just then, a scab-ridden swarthy man approached GOB III. He was draped in a a lambskin coat, sporting faded jeans of an American origin, and had the look of Hell deep in his eyes. He sauntered on forth towards our fallen hero, the hero that only hours before was on top of the world as the mere grandson of a mechanic and living the life in Paris, France.
The ill-shaven man approached GOB, sat down next to him, and muttered a few words in a strange Patois of French. When he understood fully the lack of linguististical skills possessed by our hero, he broke out into a silloloquey of broken English mixed with a smatttering of the strange sounding Patois.
"Hey, you, have cigaarette? I need cigarette....me, ah, my name is Negre...." |
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Negre then took a cigarette from GOB, lit it up, took a deep puff, and blew perfectly formed smoke rings towards the Graffiti laden glass ceiling of the bus stop. The rings wobbled and evaporated to the natural tune of universal entropy. He rubbed his forehead and spread his legs for a moment, and all of his mannerisms disturbed GOB tremendously. He felt as if he were peeing in a public urinal in the presence of a glib bystander. GOB wanted to brood alone, and the existence of Negre did not help. Nor did it help that Negre was rather large and menacing in countenance. Negre was the epitome of a swarthy gangster crafted from the womb of the underworld of economic and cultural disparity. Negre was obviously of North African origin, and, by the looks of him, appeared to have a certain "Nothing to Lose" ambience about him. He sighed, moaned, coughed, blew smoke rings, spread his legs, fidgeted- all after asking for a cigarette- and at the end of the day didn't seem to care at all about how he appeared to our whiter, more successful hero.
"Ah, merdre, je serche, I look for my sister. I look for my sister. She ees a leetle girl out here, I know she is here, with her friend…..My sister is….Hey, you American?"
"Er, yes, I am American, but, I live here…I live in Paris…." Replied GOB. GOB began to explain his situation further but, to no ado, for, Negre continued.
"My sister, she is always fuking around here at Etoile with her salope, that fuking beech friend….Amina, fuking Amina, always ….fuk, I am looking for my little sister….here name is Zhora. She is…" Negre then aped the universal motion of a pregnant mother. With this gesture, GOB's heart jumped. GOB knew immediately that Zhora was, was being the operative word, his victim. Zhora was dead! |
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I definitely think there is some blood in the water now! |
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heehehehee, life is a biatch Patrick, life is a biatch...
Down the boulevard, near a distant foggy image of the Arc du Triomphe, there emerged the form of a young man strolling down the sidewalk with a certain gait that GOB recognized and dubbed "The Parisian Maladjusted Youth Strut". This strut he had seen many times before, and, to the extent that he could compare it with the New York Frankenstein Hip Hop Gait, this walk was a walk of disenchanted youth in the throes of a moderate male hormonal imbalance. In order to engage in the Parisian Maladjusted Youth Strut, it helped if the ambler had trainers, a gym suit, short cropped hair filled with styling gel, and a certain fidgety energy that afforded you the look of a young man operating on some unknown high and possibly nefarious strength. This particular young man possessed these traits. He bopped up and down, waving his arms theatrically in the process, and shot glances at, presumably, a play-crowd of invisible admirers. With each foot forward in his trek, he managed to look right and left at least once, and he also displayed a kinetic motion that had a non-zero vertical component. GOB thought he looked like a piston under the fire of a highly flammable combustion engine.
As Negre was sitting to GOB's left, and the young man was cruising down the boulevard on GOB's right, GOB jumped a foot in the air in terror when Negre suddenly whistled and then shouted out to the young man, "Bedrine!!!!!Bedrine!!!!!!!Bedrine, come here! Come here!!!! Bedrine!"
Bedrine stopped for a second and scratched his head, then he made a few motions that seemed to GOB to be reminiscent of a Los Angeles gang hand signal. Then Bedrine held out his hands in a mock show of affection, as if he were ready to hug his dear Negre, after which, GOB heard a chortle from his new acquaintance. Bedrine then broke out of his Parisian Strut and into a fast jog, in which he periodically jumped the hoods of cars and spat at store windows, all to the chorus of the chortles of the swarthy Negre, who seemed to be thoroughly enjoying Bedrine's antics.
GOB, of course, was not enjoying this. GOB wanted to be alone, but now he had to deal with his feelings about just committing murder in the face of his victim's brother, as well as his victim's brother's young, potent, and (possibly destructive) teenage friend. |
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"Bedrine, Bedrine, I was looking for you! Have you seen Zhora?" barked out Negre.
Bedrine wobbled his head back and forth and flitted his arms in a hip hop fashion, which, collectively GOB perceived meant that Bedrine had not seen her.
"Let's go to Rachid's place, get a drink there…..I am way thirsty….Cheb Farid is playing…." Said Bedrine.
"Er, uh, fuking man, I can't find my sister….fuking Amina, but, fuk it, they'll find their way home…Hey, check out this American, hey, what is your name again?"
"George."
"Right, George, hey Bedrine, meet George, the American, hahaha, USA, USA, USA!"
Then, Bedrine chimed in with "USA, USA, USA!!!!!" As Bedrine screamed the chant with the perfect harmonic skills of a choir boy, that is, a French choir boy, er, that is, a French Algerian choir boy, he pumped out his fists in several directions as if he were staving off a pending attack of Thai kick boxers.
"Hey, USA, you want a drink with us?" offered Bedrine.
"Ahh, really, Bedrine, thank you, but, mmm, I have had enough tonight and I would…"
"No, USA, you come with us, great place, very great place, Rachids man! Rachids! Do you know Rai Music?"
"Rai music, no, is that sort of like sort of like Reggae?"
"hahahahah! Hahahahha! Reggae! Reggae! Hahahahhaha…er, ah, Reggae, you mean like Bob Marley man, Bob Marley, no, man, no….Rai….Rai, Rai is cool tres cool man, it is like Hip Hop man, but much better man. It is the soul of us man, it speaks to us, it is the sound of North Africa man!"
"Er, that sounds really cool, but I really just want to"
"Enough of that USA, you come with us! I buy you a whiskey, hehehheheehee, I get you an American Whiskey! USA, you will love Rachid's, yes, Negre?"
"Mais Oui, our American friend…ami, you will like Rachids….You go with us", replied Negre.
GOB understood that this offer was just slightly more than an offer. This was a persuasive suggestion, thought GOB. Actually, it was more than persuasive suggestion. Actually, it sounded like an order to GOB. He pondered for a few seconds how to rescind the faux invitation, during which time he reviewed snippets of the recent past, that is, the killing of Zhora in the 50 euro per night hotel. He felt rushed, and, in haste, he could not arrive at a reasonable escape plan from the pending jaunt to Rachids. Thus, he finally demurred by saying, "ok, but just one drink….I really must get home."
"hahaha …hehehehe, don't worry USA, just one drink, je promis! One drink….that is all, but I think you will want more than one, yes? USA, you have car?" |
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Nonius, I know you live in France and sheat (I genuinely feel sorry), but can you actually speak French like the frogs? |
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niet, ya ni magu goverite fransuski. |
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"Er, yes, I have a car, but it is in the shop…"
GOB's explanation was cut short by the sound of several sirens emanating from various directions. The three men looked around in vane to pinpoint a primary source of the blaring noises. GOB knew immediately the root of these cries- they surely were the cries of sirens in police cars, paramedics vehicles, and fire trucks on their way towards the scene of his crime against Zhora. Negre stood up and looked down the street towards Etoile, while Bedrine scratched his head while asking GOB an trite question. The sirens loomed towards a focal point nearby.
GOB instantly thought of enticing Negre and Bedrine to go to Rachids for a whiskey, for he certainly didn't want to be in their presence at the hotel where it all happened. He envisioned an enraged Negre killing him with his bear hands in front of innocent onlookers as well as a slew of feeble policemen. GOB thought of turning himself in, but, he wanted to do this in his own timeframe and not under the threat of vigilante justice exacted from a pair of young Parisian hoodlums. No, he would bear the immanent process of spending a few hours at Rachid's, with his victim's brother, then go home, sleep earshot away from his trusting wife of several years, go to work, and then, in a clear state of mind, figure out the next steps in his quandary. This made perfect sense to our hero, and indeed a short wisp of pride flowed through him. He was down, but not out! He could still reason and look relatively calm in the face of a very difficult pending situation. Then waves of acute panic struck him as the sirens grew louder.
"Something big is happening, shit, Bedrine, there must be an entire fleet of police cars going there, somewhere, what the fuk? Bedrine, where is that shit?"
"Fuk this, let's go to Rachid's", said Bedrine, while he gazed about into the night with a disinterested look. "USA, you have a car, no?"
GOB was relieved that Bedrine and Negre completely forgot, or maybe never paid attention to, his short spiel about the inoperable car. He quickly seized on the opportunity to reverse the story, and, at the same time, a fleeting image flashed in his mind revolving around being filleted by the two young men with a very sharp set of steak knives. This image was followed by vivid reconstruction of the seconds leading to the fatal moment of Zhora's fall from the window. He then imagined for a few seconds what Zhora must look like now, sprawled out, limbs contorted in unnatural directions and postures. Now she surely took the form of a lifeless blob of flesh, bones, and blood that was, with a high degree of certainty, still mildly impregnated onto and into an unknown cracked surface of cobblestone, dirt, and cement.
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The three men then ventured out towards the siren's source, meandering through nooks and crannies of small cobblestone rues in the seventeenth district of Paris this fateful night. Negre ambled on and stared at the sidewalk, while Bedrine hopped and skipped with a certain deliberate negligence to personal posture. He whistled and flayed his arms about, and then he lit a cigarette in a theatrical fashion.
GOB, meanwhile, tried his best during this seemingly endless search for the car to act normally. However, thousands of thoughts swam through his brain. Guilt was the overriding emotion, and, while rational minds may make an intellectual distinction between emotion and thought, his feelings of guilt were accompanied by a flow of memes, little trinkets of memories, constructs from experiences, and other bagatelles of cognition. For some reason, he thought of his childhood on Long Island and all of the mindless things he did as a child. This seemed like it was a universe away, and he yearned for a second to turn back the clock, but, of course, such wishes were rather futile at this point. He had convinced himself just thirty minutes ago that God did not exist. Even if He existed, surely he would be just enough to not grant such a wish to such a vile person as GOB. As GOB thought this precise thought, he then reveled in an afterthought that maybe God did exist. For, why would GOB even think such a thought about morality? In his inebriated state coupled with his average intellect, unfortunately he could not carry this internal debate to its seemingly logical conclusion, let alone the next step. He was aware of this, and it made him angry and sad.
After several minutes of nearly random exploration, GOB finally spotted his trusty Benz on a small street near Grande Armee. They piled into the car, GOB started it up, and they were on their way to Rachids. Rachids was apparently located somewhere north of Les Halles- that vile focal point teeming with drug dealers, drunks, human scavengers, and other low lifes. So thought GOB. They got lost in the labyrinth of winding one way streets behind the large Gothic church next to Les Halles. GOB could not remember its name. This disturbed him.
They drove down one way narrow rues, while Negre and Bedrine argued ostensibly about the precise location of Rachids. Bedrine lit up a joint and began to sing a few songs in Arabic. GOB nervously looked at his watch, which read 3:07AM. Negre shouted at Bedrine, to stop singing. Bedrine opened the car window in the back and commenced into a tremendous howl at any human passing by. GOB sped up, thinking that a higher speed would shorten the search. Then he realized the innate foolishness in this logic, so he slowed down to a speed below the limit. Negre uttered a few "oh-la-las", and GOB could not discern whether Negre was exasperated by the slow speed, the change in speed, or their collective inability to locate Rachids.
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 They got out of the car and ambled down the street until they arrived at a dilapidated unmarked building that was nestled between a Chinese Restaurant and a copy center. They then gingerly walked down an iron spiral staircase towards a subterranean floor. Negre pounded on a door covered with a brown faux leather façade that puffed out about three inches from the surface due to unknown unnatural fluffy substances embedded in its interior. Sounds of Arabic-tinged music could be heard behind the door. GOB looked at his watch, which read 3:21 AM. Finally, after several seconds, the puffy door was opened by a middle-aged North African woman sporting a blue satin low cut dress that exposed ample mounds of fleshy breasts. GOB thought she looked rather attractive, if not slightly north of his acceptable dividing line of age for the purpose of a quick fuk. His tormented mind paused for a second in order to embark on a fleeting fantasy of fuking this not-so-young woman, with her large breasts, her aquiline nose, her pulled back shiny black hair, and her exotic countenance. This was nothing but a flicker of a respite from his current moral dilemma, and he quickly resumed his self-inflicted self-hatred.
They entered Rachids to find a smoky, dark room packed with milling crowds of laughing and chattering denizens of the night. GOB heard a mix of French, Arabic, and even a little English as he floated by the circles of chattering patrons. Everyone seemed happy. The music was upbeat, melodic, and reached out to even a typical American like GOB. Yes, GOB liked this music. He immediately liked it, as if he fully understood its roots, meaning, and political purpose.
Towards the right of the entrance was a small room replete with candle-lit circular tables that could not fit more than three people each. A pungent smell of whiskey, marijuana, and perfume wafted through the air. He scanned the room and noticed that the crowd seemed young, attractive, and hip. An odd feeling of the pleasure of being in a cool and unknown joint mixed with portents of pending doom from his deeds vibrated through his soul. Flashes of Zhora's dead body blended with the reality of the here and now at Rachids. He looked at the singer at the far end of the room. This singer had a microphone strapped in a headset that was strung around his neck. He was singing with great abandon about an obviously dear and moving personal subject, and he was playing melodic wisps of music on a small, fragile electronic keyboard. The crowd was elated at his performance, and they all knew the words of this particular song that he was performing. Negre and Bedrine bopped up and down to the beats of this tune, and commenced in aping the singer's lyrics in the refrain.
Negre then looked glanced over to GOB and shouted over the chatter, the music, and general noise of merriment, "George, this is a beautiful song….this song is about the women from my country. This song is about how beautiful they are. They are beautiful, no? I love the women from my country. All of them, you should meet my family man! Hey, we go get a drink….Jack Daniels!"
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 and then the lights suddenly flashed on, and a soul American boy, not more than Eighteen years old......stood on a circular table.....the music stopped....the joints went out....Negre and Bedrine looked at each other and shrugged their shoulders in a sign of puzzlement....
"THIS IS MIKEBELL. THIS IS VERY DISTURBING. NONIUS, TELL YOUR MENTAL DOCTOR THAT YOU ARE TOTALLY MENTAL."
Several seconds passed. The patrons looked at each other as if reaching out for a divine explanation for this pathetic violation, this taxing of their entertainment. then, they all walked towards the young boy, glasses in hand, and commenced into a monophonic chant, "Must kill Bell, must kill Bell, MUST KILL BELL!!!!"
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Is the story the same as on the other forum? I started copy-pasting it on W****tt but now I don't know if this is a different version or exactly the same...
Elucidation, please! |
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this version here has hidden messages to various NukFin cell operatives. |
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Thanks.
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Oh dear, I think Nonius might be the next John F. Nash. Look on the brightside Nonius, you'll get some new friends and a Nobel prize! |
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In fact, in the 2001 Columbia Encyclopedia, Nonius comes straight after John F. Nash under "Mathematics". |
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my brother is, in fact, an acute paranoid schizophrenic. I am too lazy to check if that is spelled correctly.
The swarthy hostess found an empty round table for the three men. It was situated to the left of the makeshift stage, next to fire exit. The men sat down and Bedrine quickly produced two hundred Euro bills in exchange for a bottle of Jack Daniels. He then lit up a cigarette and continued singing. The bottle arrived quickly and they began to chase down several shots. GOB didn't realize how inebriated he was becoming until he stared at the ceiling to find a swirling mix of plasterboard particles gyrating back and forth above him. He knew this was time to stop, but he continued. They drank the entire bottle in about one hour, after which, GOB and Negre joined a small crowd of reveling dancers. GOB tried his best to mime the anatomically difficult North African dance that was expressed so easily by all of the other patrons around him. He laughed and shouted out, but, inside, he felt like he had fallen into a dark abyss. This went on for several minutes and was only broken by a certain commotion coming from the entrance of the nightclub. Several patrons, in the state of shock, were searching through the smoky mist of the cavernous environs for someone. Then, GOB distinctly heard a few voices call out for Negre. He then heard a cry that sounded like the last wailing sound of a human's last breath. A woman fell to her knees and flitted about like an animal undergoing a hunter's slaughter. A few men approached Negre and beckoned him to come with them to another room. Negre stopped dancing and looked confused. GOB knew what was going on. GOB's heart jumped and another precious moment of sobriety flowed through him. The men left with Negre into the darkness in search of, ostensibly, a private place for a tete-a-tete. GOB waited a few minutes, after which he heard a painful sounding cry from Negre. Nevertheless, the singer continued with his song about another endearing topic. Bedrine scrambled over to Negre. At this point, GOB knew that Negre knew about Zhora. GOB reckoned the Negre may at this point also know that an American middle-aged male was the last, as it were, to see Zhora alive. Thus, GOB, in a primal move of self-preservation, bolted out of the exit door near their table.
GOB ran up another spiral staircase, onward and upward towards the goal of the dingy streets that were replete with all of the low-lifes that he despised. He emerged, unscathed from being in the den of his victim's friends, and he ran beyond his normal physical capacity towards his trusty 93 Benz. Nervously, he figeted with the key to open the door. The keys slipped into the slimy gutter, which, for my reader's knowledge, was populated with a few condom wrappers and coke cans. He finally was able to enter the car. He started it up and sped off into the night. His next steps are unclear. He did in fact go to a few bars, in the heat and panic of his situation, and he downed several shots of various strains of hard liquor. And then, the rest is nothing but blackness.
This, my friends, is how we find GOB III, son of a mechanic, grandson of a mechanic, in his car with a bloodied nose, somewhere near Avenue Foch.
GOB cleaned the blood of his nose and noticed a certain change of temperature take place. A new day was at birth. GOB looked again at the sky, and then he looked down the road. He noticed that the road looked almost identical to the road he was on when he met Negre. Just hours before, the City of Light was the ideal, idyllic city to live in. Now, he saw nothing but despair and ugliness everywhere. This particular street, like that on which he met Negre, seemed teeming with virtual micro-organisms that cause evil, death, and despair. Of course, the actual thought process was very simple in his mind, but, it was there.
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Epilogue
In the country of France, there is a region called Brittany. It extends out into the Atlantic from of the northwest corner of France like a bump caused by the infliction of force on a human's head. It is replete with craggy inlets, bays, wild coastlines, and highly desirable microclimates. In its interior, flat meadows and fields grace its land. It is a land that once held sway to an ancient Celtic culture and, to this day, one still finds snippets of this in a village festival accompanied by bagpipe toting musicians, Celtic inspired dress, and a certain undercurrent of the rejection of the notion of a common French culture.
In Brittany, there is a city called Rennes. It is not a pretty city. It looks like a wart on the head of a human with a bump, caused by the infliction of force. It is the black sheep, an eye sore, in a land that conjures up grand visions of a lost past.
In Rennes, there is a prison. And, in this prison, there is a cell block with the drab moniker of 12-A. Along Cell block 12-A, there is a 2 by 3 meter cell. It's number is 97. And in this cell exists a man by the name of Halim al Rachid. It is 5AM, and Halim is quietly waking up from a peaceful sleep. He takes a step to his tin sink, and carefully washes his hands. He then unrolls his makeshift carpet, fashioned out of a slew of materials that he bartered for during his rare interactions with other humans. He then quietly prayed to God. It is the first thing that Halim does every morning.
Halim is a good prisoner. He is quiet, obedient, and has the blessing from God to continue with his existence absent of the typical human violations that go on in incarceration centers. He is fluent in three languages, writes, does mathematics, and helps other prisoners cope with their existence.
He prayed to God. He then spent one hour meditating. During his meditation, the sun rose, and although no unfortunate denizen of the prison of Rennes had an actual window near his cell, the sunlight did force its energy into cell block 12-A as it always had done for many decades. The sun's rays wrapped around the sharp corners of the block's building, and crept into the interior of the block with the force of a higher authority.
Halim finished his meditation, washed his hands again, and took a step to his small metallic cot. Halim then reflected for a moment on his past. Halim recalled, for a flicker of a moment, his life as George Oran Beckmann III, GOB III. Halim remembered his life in Paris as a high level manager making a lot of money, having a wife and a beautiful daughter. For a second, he wept, but, by this time, he was used to an occasional nostalgic feeling of regret.
His trial went quickly. He admitted to everything. He did not attempt to justify his crimes against his brethren. In his mind, he stood guilty in the eyes of a higher authority, and, thankfully, he finally located this authority.
Halim did in fact try to retain his marriage and the ties to his little daughter. But it was in vane. His wife eventually moved back to New England. She eventually remarried, and, to the best of my knowledge, she has remarried and happy. I apologize to my readers for not expounding on her life, motives, and thoughts. Maybe, in another tale, I will, for she is a very interesting woman of many talents and interests.
As for Halim, I must document that he found his higher authority in the religion of Islam. I do not know who or what inspired him to convert to Islam. He has told me that Islam gave him the instructions for rightful living, that it was a roadmap, a blue print, as it were, for every action in life. I personally have a thought that he was attracted to the rules in Islam that forbid drinking. I have mentioned this conjecture to him, but, unfortunately, I can only extract a certain modicum of admissive evidence in this conjecture. Halim did in fact tell me that he thought that alcohol was in fact evil, and that all forms of substance abuse, or, more generally, any abuse of any crutch that impairs one's ability to distinguish between right from wrong, was evil. There is not much more to say. I could try to develop a deep and profound philosophy on the subject, but, I am on the fence with respect to it. For now, all I can say is that I will, at least, pay homage to Halim every time I go over the edge in a dingy bar in the City of Light.
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 Patrik
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nice work. definitely something for the NP Annals. |
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 FDAXHunter
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Very nice. I think it should be PDFed for easier download? |
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 elan
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Posted: 04-06-2004 13:07 |
re: elan. good point, whatever happened to that kid? seems like he just feel off the edge of the world or something...
No no, dude, I am ok. It took Nonius three months to inform me about this forum and thus deprive me of the title of a Founding Father. |
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For whosoever hath, to him shall be given |
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 Nonius
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true true, FDAX, can we comp Elan with a moniker like "Elan from the 'No Bull' Clan"? |
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